I have an honest question. How is the story so far? All the twists you expected? How is the telling? Good enough, mediocre or...? Do you like it? Do you love it? Can you see it...?
What about the plot?
I added and subtracted as I went on, so there's sure to be plot holes and mistakes, and all those will be fixed as soon as writing is done and editing commences. Regardless, i'd like to hear your opinion; it contributes a lot to the writing experience here on Wattpad.
Do you see a bright future for Forbidden?