Well, first off the title could be shorted a bit to, "I'm Stronger Than You Think", since most people remember shorter titles. Along those lines, I would recommend that you create a cover for your story, and if you cannot, I can always create one for you. (This is because the cover of the story is what makes the first impression upon readers.) Second of all, I would highly suggest that you have someone proofread your chapters before you post them for any possible grammatical errors or inaccuracies, as I noticed quite a few. In addition, I would like to see you try to put an atmosphere or mood to your story when you use songs, considering I've made that mistake, as it will improve it dramatically. Try incorporating the dance routines, if there are any. Furthermore, it would make your writing flow better if you used more descriptive language. For example, if you wanted to say: "He said, 'I got the role!'" you could instead state, "He shouted enthusiastically, 'I got the role!'" Lastly, I noticed that there aren't many tags, so I would advise that you add more, considering this is how readers will discover your story. These are merely suggestions, so you don't have to follow them, but I would appreciate if you would take this into consideration!
