Here's a sneak peek on the first chapter and intro.
Intro
One day in a far off land of trucpa there was a pup named Molly. She was a very adventurous pup she always wandered away from the den and got lost, and her Mom will have to go after her. Most of the time she wondered what she was meant for and what her future will be like, and what her father was like, because her father was the leader of the pack and he died in a fire, and ever since he died every one was doing bad things, because there is no leader or protecter. This it just were the story begins.
Chapter 1 what have I done
This is Molly the white wolf with the black diamond on her forehead, and this is her mom which is the white plane wolf and her brother Tom he is the plane black wolf. "Come on Tom let's go explore!" Said Molly in a very lowed tone "Molly there is bears and other packs out there" said Tom. " Don't be a scardy wolf" Molly said. "Ok...." Tom said. "Not long out there right" Tom said, "ok Tom" Molly said. " Let's go" Molly said. When they where exploring the unknown the saw a dark shadowy figure and it said "get the kids over there now!"What was that?" Molly said. "Well what ever it is I don't like it" Tom said. " Tom it's another pack RUN!" Molly said very lowed. Soon they where running so fast to get out of unknown. They cod not see a thing. Suddenly Tom tripped over a root sticking out of the ground and got stuck. " Help!" Tom yelled, but Molly cod not hear him. When she got out of the unknown she said "we showed that big bad pack who was boss right." But no one responded. Then Molly looked around. "Tom" she said over and over. Then she started to cry and said " what have I done. What will mom do it me. I will never go back home in till I have Tom" she said.
