apecey

the second part of the epilogue is going to be so long, ohh my god. I will try to finish it later today but I can't promise I will be successful.
          	also, i hope you all have a fantastic day :)

RaizaMalto6

I just wanted to say that your story is very good and you are very good at doing POV, and while I was reading the ending I really cried, I don't know but your story is really good, I just wonder why I saw your story now but i hope u make another story that's all I want to say

12022NaZyea

The story that you wrote which is orphan is amazing . The relationship is slow and let's alcina and the character get to know each other and it has So much consent and really love. Also I got so shocked when it was Cassandra who let moroica free.Hope you don't cancel or delete the book but it's fine if you want to and rest if you need and also update at your own pace and you can write a original story your great at writing.

apecey

@ 12022NaZyea  Thank you so so so much! 
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TheApproachingStorm

Hi buddy! How’d you like my new chapter? (Chapter 15 of the sequel)

TheApproachingStorm

@apecey Don't worry mate, It's not a problem at all! Stay safe and happy and I'm glad you're liking it so far!
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apecey

@ LOLbot88  hi :) just read it and again, I just love the way you write. It really got me captured! Looking forward to the next chapter! I am super sorry for the late reply, I had a lot going on in my life lately.
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TheApproachingStorm

Hey Buddy! I'm currently thinking of a story idea that will crossover with my mainline universe in the future once I get to that point, but I'd like your input on the story idea! Also If I give you the idea there may be spoilers, but I'd love your input on the idea!

TheApproachingStorm

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@apecey Glad you like it so far! But anyway, after attempting to arrest Joseph, things go awry and Eli is rescued by a man named dutch. He tells of everything that's going on with the cult and says they need to build a resistance. And after some time of doing that, and even making new allies and defeating the twins Jacob and John, Eli has to find Rachel (Faith Seed) and not kill her, but to rescue her and return her to the light side. And he does just that, after they destroy the bunker and head out back to the makeshift base of the hope county jail, Eli apologizes to Rachel for abandoning her in an attempt for the cure and promises to always be by her side no matter what. She accepts his apology and then takes off his mask to reveal his pale-vampirish skin and fiery eyes. She says that after all these years, it's a face she couldn't be happier to see. They then kiss and Eli even reveals he kept the ring from the night he got cancer and proposes to Rachel. She gleefully accepts and they then head to take down Joseph Seed at his Compound.
            
            It's here Jospeh calls Eli as his son again, and it's revealed that Joseph is actually Eli's biological father. He explains that they had their first child, and that when he became devoted to god, his wife disagreed and it led to a fight that left Eli orphaned. Eli still wants to kill Joseph, but as he's about to, he detects a nuke with his sensors about the reach the county. Joseph finally reveals he was right about the "collapse" he had prepared his followers for and it's up to him to stop it. And Eli then flies up and tanks the Nuke Head on, and thanks to a miracle, he endures it and saves Hope county from its doom, even agreeing to spare his father as he'd realized the error of his ways. 
            
            After that there's a few more adventures that involve the story of FNAF Security Breach and even RE8 and you'll just have to wait and see me craft 2 of the biggest twists of all my storyline. Hope you like the idea from what I revealed!
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apecey

This sounds so interesting!! Please include that into your new story / make your mew story evolve about that storyline :D I would love to read that!
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TheApproachingStorm

Sorry the word counts can only go so high with comments.
            
            Continuing on: Even after easing into his new life, Eli (P.S I've decided his last name is now changed to Summers) is still uncomfortable, as others around him whisper and talk out of discomfort because of his Vampirish Skin and Eyes. He but he starts learn of his abilities, including mastery of all martial art ever known, and of course, being able to harness any superpower he can think of thanks to his Omega Gene. And one day, in a conversation with his best friend in the mercenary society, Weasel, the Bartender, he remembers the game that's always held around the mercenary world, called the bloodsport. To which he finally chooses his Callsign and Hero name: Bloodsport. 
            
            After years of working as a hero alongside his new sort of family, he hears of a conflict in Hope County, Montana. A doomsday cult know as Project at Eden's Gate,  has taken over the county and is killing innocents who refuse to join, and touring people in the name of god. It's led by Joseph Seed and his family. 
            
            Bloodsport, now with a new suit and mask that cover up his body and grants him increased durability thanks to nano-tech, he, Sheriff Whitehorse and the others head out on a chopper on a mission to arrest the Cult Leader, Joseph Seed. However, Eli shows hesitancy about the operation as, it does have a possibility of going bad. When they approach the Cult Compound, they enter the church to arrest Joseph. However, that's when Eli, who also had his nerve endings sorted off and his emotions destabilized and neutered because of the mutation, sees Joseph's family. Among them is Rachel Jessop herself, now calling herself "Faith Seed", alongside Joseph's 2 brothers Jacob and John. Joseph refers to Eli as his son, despite Eli not understanding what he means, saying god will not let him take him. 
            
            I'll continue it in another comment! :)
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apecey

Guys I entered "Orphan" for the Wattys and I am scared? Lol it's only the second time I ever did something like this. Wish me luck

TheApproachingStorm

Oo I gotta enter my stuff in when I can
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Homo_catmom

OH MY GOD YESSS!
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TheApproachingStorm

Oh yeah and good luck my friend!
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TheApproachingStorm

Hey There! You liking my storyline so far?

apecey

@ LOLbot88  Hi! I sincerely apologize, I haven't been able to catch up with your story because I have been super busy with school and my friends and work the past weeks, but I will give it a read later and tell you everything I think!
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TheApproachingStorm

Hey there! How're you liking my sequel so far?

TheApproachingStorm

Aww thanks man! More to come soon!
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apecey

@ LOLbot88  A lot :) The different personalities of the children are super interesting and very well written! 
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