apollossunshine

I'm writing a new book would you please read it and tell me what you think. It would mean so much to me. I'm not sure if I should finish it. Its her soul (a fan fiction of the host) XD

MantashaMaryam

I enjoyed your book so far.... your first chapter was pretty strong..... but your typos like spelling mistakes and capitalizations of letters make it really hard to understand
          
          One more thing, in case I haven't offended you yet (jk), your intro probably gives away a little too much information, unless you have a good reason for that.
          
          Lastly, I hope I didn't sound too criticizing because I'm a pretty shi**y writer myself. Sorry. :)

apollossunshine

@MantashaMaryam no i like Constructive cicriticism it help me get better
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apollossunshine

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          Nickname: Cole or coco
          Eye color:  hazel
          Hair color: light honey brown
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          Favorite color: yellow
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          Favorite book: the lost hero rick Riordan 
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apollossunshine

@apollossunshine umm yeah B-)  i like fall out boy lol
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apollossunshine

@AdrianSchulz15 thanks Sugar whats been going down?
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