MantashaMaryam
I enjoyed your book so far.... your first chapter was pretty strong..... but your typos like spelling mistakes and capitalizations of letters make it really hard to understand One more thing, in case I haven't offended you yet (jk), your intro probably gives away a little too much information, unless you have a good reason for that. Lastly, I hope I didn't sound too criticizing because I'm a pretty shi**y writer myself. Sorry. :)