applemunch7

Hii guys, long time no see! sooo I haven't forgotten about my book, I have just been focused on the one I'm working on(I'm planning on sending it to a publishing agency to make it a real book).
          	
          	Soo, I'm debating whether to discontinue this one or just edit some of the first chapters. My writing has improved so I don't like the first parts anymore.
          	
          	LT(teacher) 's grammar improves in every chapter I think, and that disturbs me, idk about you guys.
          	
          	So should I discontinue or edit?

applemunch7

Hii guys, long time no see! sooo I haven't forgotten about my book, I have just been focused on the one I'm working on(I'm planning on sending it to a publishing agency to make it a real book).
          
          Soo, I'm debating whether to discontinue this one or just edit some of the first chapters. My writing has improved so I don't like the first parts anymore.
          
          LT(teacher) 's grammar improves in every chapter I think, and that disturbs me, idk about you guys.
          
          So should I discontinue or edit?

applemunch7

I changed my username to 'applemunch7' but in the story that I'm writing I am still tomsediot7....I want to write another story but LT(teacher) won't be ending anytime soon
          any advice?

Taetae_ember003

@applemunch7 Really welcome 
            Please check my stories too and let me see what you think of it 
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Taetae_ember003

@applemunch7 I think it's best you finish this before you start another so your audience will be focused on one book instead of two 
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