apriloaks

@gabbyinak hey sweetielooks wow I just got your message...well if I were you I would let God guide me. Pray over it also we both have to remember that this is fiction. If it were my story I would make it to were at least 3 or 4 of the group would get the Holy Ghost and le the others be like doubting Thomas was. And eventually the were to all get in church and change their music to Christian music. That would be my ending. I think that the story is good so far as it is. But you'll need to put stumbling blocks in it. God never promised a bed of roses and we cant ride the fence. Its only one way to Heaven. With the boys getting in church and the stumbling blocks and them learning our ways and why theres a story or two for you. I would love to help in any way I can if you'd like. 

apriloaks

@gabbyinak hey sweetielooks wow I just got your message...well if I were you I would let God guide me. Pray over it also we both have to remember that this is fiction. If it were my story I would make it to were at least 3 or 4 of the group would get the Holy Ghost and le the others be like doubting Thomas was. And eventually the were to all get in church and change their music to Christian music. That would be my ending. I think that the story is good so far as it is. But you'll need to put stumbling blocks in it. God never promised a bed of roses and we cant ride the fence. Its only one way to Heaven. With the boys getting in church and the stumbling blocks and them learning our ways and why theres a story or two for you. I would love to help in any way I can if you'd like.