I know i cant change everyone's opinion and control whatever you wanted to comment but please If y'all didn't like how I ended my story dont trash it just to not offend me, twas years ago and i was so young and naive back then i didn't really wanted to write but you get inspirations and ideas from other so why not give it a try. I appreciate others who're asking for more chapters or commenting to inspire me to write more but for others who does nothing but to insult and give negative opinions about my story then i guess you came in to the wrong profile and read a wrong story, go and find stories that will achieve your high expectations. Its not just all about the bitin endings its about the whole story.