RA_VANYA

Share your comments,so I can improve my story 

aradhya_RRR123456

@RA_VANYA not yet actually not all parts but I have readed only two chapters
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aradhya_RRR123456

@RA_VANYA  Actually, I am also a new writer. I don't know anything about stories but I can say you just add some suspense on your stories maybe it can help if I am wrong so I am really sorry don't take it seriously I am just giving my opinion to you thank you so much for following me
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