aras_lahug

I honestly love when people talk to me on here XD 
          	I've just found that I kinda sorta appear uninviting haha. feel free to talk to me!

burningbells

Hii! I love your works! I am a new writer. Could you please read my story and give me some suggestions so that I can improve it? It would be great if you acknowledge it. Can you please help me by giving me suggestions?

burningbells

Thank you so much ❤️❤️
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aras_lahug

Ok! Well, I noticed a few errors such as sentence structure (some coupe be short and some could be longer or combined) and some tense shifts, but otherwise I liked it so far. I'm only a few paragraphs in though XD
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emilymac_

Hey @aras_lahug please read my book 'Mr. Egotistic' and maybe vote and comment as well? Thanks so much! Have a great day x

aras_lahug

Hey. Would you mind doing to same with my book "All By Chance" please? Thanks. 
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aras_lahug

So I haven't been on recently, but I've decided to get back to my writing! (YAY!)
          This summer I plan on completing and adding a whole new story, but in the meantime, I'll be putting up chapters for All By Chance's sequel "1 in 7 Billion" 
          I'll try to put up a new chapter every week (okay Preet?! @preetp890 That good enough?" ) though I may skip weeks occasionally. Thanks and have a wonderful day.