TBH: I honestly prefer 1 in 7 Billion over All By Chance, so I'm trying to write it in a way that the first book isn't 100% necessary to read, but is good background.
Hii! I love your works! I am a new writer. Could you please read my story and give me some suggestions so that I can improve it? It would be great if you acknowledge it. Can you please help me by giving me suggestions?
Ok! Well, I noticed a few errors such as sentence structure (some coupe be short and some could be longer or combined) and some tense shifts, but otherwise I liked it so far. I'm only a few paragraphs in though XD
Ciao aras_lahug!!!! Scusa tanto per il disturbo! Ti ho scritto perchè ho appena aggiornato una delle mie storie, ti andrebbe di darci un'occhiata e dirmi cosa ne pensi o votarla? spero passerai! Ti aspetto! Grazie! <3
So I haven't been on recently, but I've decided to get back to my writing! (YAY!)
This summer I plan on completing and adding a whole new story, but in the meantime, I'll be putting up chapters for All By Chance's sequel "1 in 7 Billion"
I'll try to put up a new chapter every week (okay Preet?! @preetp890 That good enough?" ) though I may skip weeks occasionally. Thanks and have a wonderful day.