and in terms of wording, if you like using simple words, use simple words. if you like using complex words, use complex words, if you like both, use both, the choice is yours. it adds a little bit of you into the text. same with metaphors, analogies, and similes. if you don’t want to write them, you’re not going to write them well. let them come to you naturally, and when they do write it down so you can go back to it later. the universe means you started from that quote ‘the universe means you’. it came to me sometime at night, and from there i filled in the blanks with the direction i wanted the story to go. i didn’t write the story in order either. i wrote the ending before i wrote any of the chapters that led up to it. i’m pretty sure sapnap and karl’s chapter was the last chapter i wrote.
ALWAYS edit your text. i tend to write at night, because i find my sleeping thoughts to be my best ones, but i always edit when i’m fully awake. and i edit by reading my text out loud because it helps me spot mistakes easily. i also like to edit after fully writing the piece, that way i don’t already know what was written there so my brain doesn’t automatically fill in any errors.
and that leads me onto another thing, i like to fully write my books before publication (i’ve only just recently started doing this) because that prevents taking major breaks or giving up on a book where people are already invested. i find i’m more likely to click on a book if it says it’s recently been updated, or that it’s completed, so by fully writing it you can make sure that you’re not gonna give up.
i hope that helped a bit!!