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Hope you don't mind. It would mean the world to me if you could check out my new story and give me your valuable feedback. t's a GxG. It would mean so much to me. Thank you https://www.wattpad.com/story/387197611?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=yelstien
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Fortunately I don’t think like that, I don’t care, I don’t feel any way, your comment was just there. However if it’s as you say, your story is not my kind to scene, I don’t do business stories, you know how people just randomly get together after meeting once, I don’t understand that, The human race is insanely overpopulated, anyone with common sense would tell you that, so I feel as if you can’t just randomly find your soul mate off the street as people do now a days. It has to be forced proximity. Like back in the days, there were villages, and usually you would marry in your village as it’s forced proximity. Chapter 6 if I was nila I would have wondered why athira was reaching out to me, I would’ve thought she just wanted to use me for sex, and not being very subtle. And it’s clear they both have feelings for each other in the latest chapters, and they both know it. I don’t like obliviousness, beating around the bush. It’s not specifically your story, I’ve read so much and it’s exactly the same. Honestly I can’t really explain, because I would never find myself in a situation like that in the first place, as I said before I don’t read business. I can’t really put my input in something I wouldn’t be in, because I would never put myself in a situation like that. I’m extremely self aware which is good at sometimes but the absolute worse. Other than that, it wasn’t cringe at all, I had no secondhand embarrassment which is surprising, as every single story I’ve read except one, which they deleted, had nothing of the sort. And the intimacy was 85% spot on. Which is a lot considering it’s my opinion. Not saying my input is valuable. But I’m really just emotionless.
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