ari345

@HelloRieza  thanks for ur advice and I'm going to post another chapter this Friday just to let you know.

HelloRieza

Hello @ari345 :) I'm really sorry that I just too late to replied ur message :( About ur books, I've read one called "Bullied" 'til the last chapter that you posted :D I love that story and the conflict between Ashley and Justin it's good. Honestly, it makes me wanna read more 'til the end of the story. But, I just feel no excited a little when I read that story. For me, it's because you didn't mentioned the details 'bout what just happened between the characters and you explained the story too short, so I almost don't get it all. Sorry about my words :( I know that I'm not the master of writing and I'm still learning and improving my skill just like you, but I just wanna give you an advice to improve your writing skill and maybe it can make you to be a better writer. So, keep writing no matter what (^^)9 and I will follow you and voted your story ;) Okay, inform me if you just posted "Bullied" ;)) Thanks xx

HelloRieza

Hello there! Thanks so much for voted my story :D That's really means a ton to me. I wish that you wanna keep read my story and enjoying it. I wanna updating it. But it's not the time, I think. Cuz I'm busy now. Well then, once again thanks so much :)
          
          -Rieza-