Hello I have read your story and it is soo beautiful that it's in my library now and i am waiting for the next upload with anticipation. aapne jyada kahin mistakes nahi kiye hain bas jahan english translation kari hain wahan translation errors hai jinhe theek karke aapke paas bhejne mein thoda time lagega, other than that jahan kahin choti si but noticeable mistakes dikhi maine wahan correction ke saath comment kar diya hai. hope I was able to help you with your work!!!