Dnyacats
Girl i am going to die—I NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER
arqles
Dnyacats
Hey girl!! How are you?
Dnyacats
@arqles awww omg thanksss! SO REAL! Showing and not telling is the hardest part of writing frr. Also, I love descriptive stories but your writing is also my FAVORITE type cuz it's easy to read, strait to the point and understanding. But if you want to be more descriptive, that's totally fine bc i enjoy those too!! My main struggles when writing is when I have to describe something like bro my mind will go blank like I don't know English—HELP!
Dnyacats
I hope they next chapter comes out next week at least ahhhhh
Dnyacats
Girl u know how u put a warning at the beginning of chapter five? I NEED MORE STORIES WHERE IT INVOLVES THAT KINDA STUFF! Like when I was reading Kiss of Water ( spoiler alert if u haven't read ) it had a lot of stuff like that, then this plot twist where this bad na'vi was insulting and harassing Ao'nung and i DID NOT EXPECT THAT.
But i lowkey wanted more of that cuz it was interesting ( I love when these characters are tortured—HELP ME ) ( I actually wish u came up with that idea...I know u would cooked with that lol )
Bro those are m fav type of Aonunete stories
( girl I'm particularly dying for the next chapter)
Anyways sorry for the rant!! Hope I'm not bothering you <3
Dnyacats
@arqles yesss! The story is SO much interesting when you add those aspects to the characters!! I'm literally SO EXCITED for the next chapters bro ik isn't gonna be so damn good
arqles
@Dnyacats GIRLL OMG OK ILL MAKE SURE TO READ IT. but yes i soo agree with giving them some type of flaws, insecurity, traumas because what character wouldn’t have any of these that js makes the story boringggg like i like characters i could relate to ykk but i know for a fact in future chaps ill be giving them some sort of problems for the plot
Dnyacats
this message may be offensive
Hey girl so I just realized ( bc I'm lowkey a dumbass ) that the scars Neteyam noticed on Ao'nung's arms are from when he was harming himself. Bro i don't know how i didn't realized. NOW I DEFINITELY NEED THE NEXT CHAPTER OMG
arqles
soo i js made a new cover for my fic n idk what think about it so lmk if we prefer the old one better or if i should keep this one for a while. PLS be brutally honest
arqles
guys it’s 1am hello i am determined to get this damn chapter out
Dnyacats
Your background blew me away omggg
Dnyacats
Are you planning on changing your book cover?
arqles
ugh i acc hate this sm like is it js me or do i absolutely loose motivation to write like i get drained or something for NO reason ?? like i swear i could write the chapter but for some reason i don’t ? i’m so mad rn.