When writing stories, check your spelling, use adjectives and broaden your vocabulary. breaking the fourth wall isn't always bad and can add a level of humor to a text. If you don't make your own writing style something captivating, odds are you won't have much of an audience. make your stories and art like the movie of the year. if it looks more like a straight to vhs/ dvd/ blueray, then go back and add more! when you write, take a page from R. A. Salvatore. his writing paints a beautiful picture in the mind's eye of the readers. It reads like a really good movie. try to make your writing more descriptive and use words that are synonymous to boring words such as very or really. try typing words long handed using such as instead of like when applicable. typing this way makes you sound more sophisticated and well learned and makes reading your text out loud more enjoyable. When in doubt, use google to find more words to use and read the sentence out loud to find the one that sounds better. If the sentence doesn't sound very good when read out loud, try rearranging the words to reinvent the sentence, but still mean the same thing.