artzymandi17

Hello my readers, I have recently transferred part of my story to quotev go check it out. If your guys go check it out it would be greatly appreciated:D
          	https://www.quotev.com/story/10138661/The-Girl-Who-Lived-in-a-Suitcase

Isabel3710

Hey can you please read my story and gave me some tips? I really love your books!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/92362196-a-lot-like-me-fantastic-beasts-and-were-to-find

Isabel3710

Thank you for you tips, and for your book I would like to see Gwen get sick or something
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artzymandi17

I just read it.  It's good, but you should try and develop Hope's character a little more and develop the plot even further.  Other than that just make sure to proof read your work before publishing.  Good job! 
            
            As for my books where would you like to see the next chapter go?
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