Red_Crayfish100
Hi.
Regarding the dark path, I never understand why make Mizuki and other girls fall easily and become Satoshi's lackey in an instant. Also, should make her the supporting Hiroshi rather than become full-blown antagonist.
Well, any explanation, maybe?
Red_Crayfish100
@ashcrusader Anyway, what do you think about my idea above? Will you consider it?
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Red_Crayfish100
@ashcrusader Anyway, wonder why the story you make tend to follow trend (in this case, betrayed male)? I mean, why not trying something.... different like making the betrayed one is female? I never seen that kind of anti-ntr story in here. Also, can you make the female ex and mother sided with MMC much earlier, rather than become antagonists? Honestly, getting tired with repetitive fanfic of the girls sided with antagonist. What do you think?
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ashcrusader
@Red_Crayfish100 Me personally never read or watch anything about Reverse Ntr but if it’s anything like the original then yes I despise it. For me whenever the female character cheats I guess it gives a chance for the Mc to comeback healed but to the point where they’re totally cold to the female character/ Antagonist
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