ashhhely

Chapter 23 of The Time Leapers is up :)

ToriHope-

I saw your ad on the Critic forum, and was wondering if you would like to critique the prologue and first chapter of my story The Fates Trilogy. The prologue's in 2nd person, and the first in 3rd, just to let you know.
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/25441802-the-fates-trilogy-strangled-fates-prologue

ashhhely

Ahhh. Alright thanks. I'll be sure to check it soon.
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ToriHope-

@theashmaster_1000 Don't worry about it. I know how busy it gets when doing the Critiques, haha.
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ashhhely

No problem. I have a lot of requests though and I'm busy so it might take one to two days really hope you don't mind. Thanks for asking~
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