@nessasinclair the first chapter is great but when he gets her the food there are some mistakes with the gender of the person speaking so it is getting confusing as to who is speaking... other wise its great and keep up with the good work
Just noticed you've given my story a chance. So I'm dropping by to let you know that I truly appreciate it and hope you'll find my work worth-it. Feedback and comments are more than welcome. Once again, thank you so much for making my day better <3