ashley09

  i will check out both! im sorry it has been a good while but im usually on wattpad mobile :) but i will go check it out!

graceluck

Hii (K) 
          
          I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women. I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all.
          
          Thanks ;) 
          d4l 
          xxxx
          

Dark-Beauty

Hey, I was wondering if you could read my first attempt on a Greek story. I decided to write about something new on wattpad instead of another vampire story even though we all love them (although it does include them but in a totally different context) I would love some feedback, criticisms welcome  
          
          It’s called: The Immoral Darkness 
          
          Cassie has watched the entrapment of her mother before her eyes from the very people she lives with…Greek Gods. Since that night, a lot has changed; she finds out that she is the reincarnated Greek goddess Aphrodite who is now on the run from the most powerful being…. Zeus. Aphrodite is the Greek god of love and a romance unfolds whilst her run from Zeus. She discovers many powers that endanger her at some points but she is Aphrodite, she somehow comes out of it unscathed. She is trying to go against the written prophecy, but will she leave the hands of her beloved citizens of an entirely different kingdom all to the rising darkness?