Hello, im sorry to bother you with one of these insufferable message but I was wondering if you could perhaps read one of my stories? Of course, if you are busy then I completely understand, but I would really appreciate any feedback and comments.
# Five Immortal Teenagers On The Road To… Destruction? #
Five vampire-born siblings are on the run from their mother, Sydney, but things start to go wrong when their mother finds them and tries to force them back home where she feels they belong. Things get out of control with violence and people end up getting hurt, but will they ever go back?
6 chapters.
# The Revolution #
Seventeen year old Eden is forced to run with her younger brother when the Vampire race reveals itself to the Human Race. Things are going out of control; people are being kidnapped and used as slaves and feeders and innocent humans are being killed to show how strong the uprising is. Eden’s sister is missing too, but will she come back? Or is she a goner like the rest of them?
# What being a teenager is really like #
This story is based on some events in my life, but it’s a little more than that too. It highlights the different aspects of a teenager’s life; school, hormones, boyfriends/girlfriends, friends…
If you could take the time to read any of these, or even more if you would like, I would respectfully and happily return the favour. Thank you so much.
