ashley_ruth

Such a good place for a constructive feedback...
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/317680392

zarav_oss

Hey Ashley,
          
          I noticed you’re still commenting on your book, and I just want to say I truly appreciate it. That said, you don’t have to feel obligated to keep doing that! I’ve been meaning to get back to your book, but I feel like I need to go back a few chapters to refresh my memory. Your book is so content-heavy, which is a great thing—it really shows how strong your world-building is.

zarav_oss

I have received and accepted your request. However, you have chosen Level Three (1000-5000 worded review) which demands two things of you. Firstly, you would have to wait a few months for 20 of my chapters to be published and then you would have to comment 10 times on the first 20 chapters. You can go through the reviews I've already posted to see if you're willing to go through that amount of work for that result. A 1000-5000 worded review demands a lot of time and effort from me so I ask the same of my clients. I would love to know if you are still interested. (Comments on the 'a word' chapter of my book don't count.)

zarav_oss

lol okayyy, the most I’ll do is take note of anything I notice.
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ashley_ruth

@LitLyricist like I said, I am not in any rush...It would Be great if I can get review on the overall aspect of my book which means the whole book if you are ok with it.
            As of now, I am not that active on wattpad beacuse of my job and so on, so I am not actually waiting on you to finish it in a hurry. Take as much time as you need. No rush.
            But I am not as good as you are in writing, so a little "meh" warning along with lots of grammatical mistakes and typos warning as it is still mostly unedited 
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zarav_oss

Hey! I wanted to know if you wanted me to read your entire book or review a certain amount of chapters. The only thing about me reading all your chapters would mean that your review would only come when I’m finished and I’m a slow ass reader. 
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SugaGlazedCooky

I just finished The Phoenix....
          Wow 
          I loved it...
          So when's the next book coming out? 
          
          I hope Tae finally gets the recognition and attention from Christina 
          
          That means I'm going to have to find something else to read.... It's going to be hard to find something between you and Laranad...
          But I will try. Keep me posted on a new book...
          Lots Of Love Always, 
          Janet L Odom
          SugaGlazedCooky
          Wilmington NC USA 
          
          On IG...
          https://instagram.com/janetlangstonodom?igshid=YTQwZjQ0NmI0OA==

ashley_ruth

@SugaGlazedCooky I am so glad that you liked it...means a lot to me!
            I really don't know if I'll have enough time to write down something soon...but I sure have some Idea about creating this universe with the story of each member of this special NIS team...I just have to pick up a member with whom I would start writing again! 
            
            But that wouldn't be anytime soon...bear with me while I take my time.
            
            Anyway, thank you so much for your support on this book. Stay fine and stay blessed! ♥ 
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ashley_ruth

Holy molly!
          Did I just finish "Phoenix"?
          
          He'll yeah I did!
          
          It was a painfully long journey with my post-grad exams, residency, long sleepless nights, hectic schedules, writer's block, and whatnot!
          
          Still, I kept my promise of writing the book down and posting one chapter every day!
          
          At last, it finished!
          
          I don't know how this book turned out, but I know one thing for sure- this plot is mesmerizing and surprisingly good. Maybe other writers could turn this book into a pure gem with their amazing writing skills where my wording or writing skill is still very mediocre!
          
          But whatever! I did it at last!!
          
          Thank you to everyone who has read this book every day and given me honest feedback...without you, I wouldn't be able to keep on going after it every day! So, Thank you!
          
          Wait, don't go yet!
          A special chapter is yet to come!
          Hope you will stick up to that! 
          
          Until that time, onnea!!!
          

ashley_ruth

@Han_sorrel Awww thank you!!!
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Han_sorrel

@ashley_ruth You did a great job.Believe me all of your books are gems.Even with hectic life you still give these amazing books.Hope to see more amazing books in future.Take care of yourself.
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ashley_ruth

Like I've promised, I have been updating "Phoenix" in a daily basis.
          And today's chapter is one of my "favourites"... Cz you know 
          Would it be too cliche if I say that I am rather feeling proud reading back this book? I feel like
          I've made a pretty solid plot and I am kinda surprised that this book even came into my mind!!
          
          Tell me how you liked it and where should I improve.
          
          Take love ♥ 
          

Elina801

Are there going to be more romantic moments between Arya and Jin??

Elina801

@ashley_ruth but I meant if at the end of the story when they're out if trouble...
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ashley_ruth

@Elina801  well, they have a very limited times in their hands...so the book will be focused on the story mainly....but I'll sneak in moments like this
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ashley_ruth

Ok...I am finally back!
          
          Last few months were hectic! 
          I know I disappointed you guys with my sudden disappearance.
          I was under tremendous workloads these past months and I couldn't manage enough time to sleep even.
          
          So here it is!
          I am finally a surgery resident now!
          I've started a new chapter of my life. Wish me luck!
          
          Last but not the least, I have finished writing and editing Phoenix...
          I hope I can start posting one chaper everyday from now on. 
          You probably have already forgotten what happened in that book due to this huge gap. In that case I suggest you go back and revise the previous chapters cause those events will be mentioned time and again in the upcoming chapters and the story will be very fast paced. 
          
          Hope you are excited like I am right now.
          Glad to be back!
          Until next time, Onnea!
          

ashley_ruth

@LaraleNad Thank you sisko!! 
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ashley_ruth

@Pawnim Thank you sooooo much 
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slowpaw

Oh wow! A surgery residency is… WOW. I wanted to say congratulations, but i think you’re right, a goodluck seems more fitting :) welcome to a another hectic journey full of hardships. But yeah, there will be a rainbow at the end :D wish you all the best!
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