Hey there! I was reading your story "Perfectly His". I think the concept of it is great, it just needs a bit of editing (I of all people know that I could re-read my own stories about 30 times and still miss errors). All-in-all, it is captivating, just a few of the details are off because of minor grammatical errors. Keep writing though!
If you writes poetry, would you ever consider posting it? (I know that sometimes poetry is more personal than stories, so I was simply curious).