assi1230

Guys, go and support my new story"Where the Butterflies Wait" please vote and comment just like my first one

MS_MADHU

Hey dear 
          You okay 
          Are you busy ?
          Why haven't posted anything from dec last year ?
          Have you quit writing!!!
          Replay please.....
          You just replied my post in April but not updating new chapters... Are you okay!

MS_MADHU

@assi1230 Ohh dear!!!!! Finally you appeared again ‍ I thought u just forgot us like that 
            Go on and post stories..... I am waiting
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MS_MADHU

@MS_MADHU No no don't be sorry 
            Apart from the reason that I really wanna read the story,I also got concerned that why are you gone for so long ? Like are you ok or not ...
            It's fine & take your time
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assi1230

@MS_MADHU sorry dear I'll update whenever I have time I'm so busy in my life that's why I can't complete this story right now
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MS_MADHU

That's it.
          I am not trying to underestimate you or offend you in any manner. 
          I am just someone who wish to smoth you writing journey a bit as a well wisher .
          Don't be offended or take my words harshly. 
          You are amazing diva ✨️ and keep writing ✍️. 
          If you have any confusion in understanding please ask me and I may help with pleasure ☺️.
          In the end if my words have offend you in any manner I apologize in advance and if you don't want this message on your page please reply and i will delete it.
          
          Lots of love from me

MS_MADHU

@MS_MADHU Oh... it's nothing much 
            My pleasure..... 
            Stay happy and healthy 
            Enjoy writing ✍️ and don't be depressed or de-motivated
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assi1230

@MS_MADHU Ohh no no I'm not offended and I like when people give me a true and genuine advice not a sugar coated words and I promise when I'll restart my story I'll try to improve myself and thank u so much for reaching to my story and your little details about my story and promise to improve myself
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MS_MADHU

Dear Author 
          I just finished reading your first story "Taming the ice king" and it's great. 
          You are already a great writer and I am really really happy that I came across your stories and you profile.
          But I just wanna point out some missing details which I feel gonna help you in your long-term writing ✍️ journey.
          • When you start writing a story please give Summary or context or teaser of the story. So that people gonna have a brief idea about the story beforehand which gonna help them understand it better. 
          • Then write a "Author' Note :  Like some kind of heads-up or warnings ⚠️ or story alerts you think readers should acknowledge before reading your stories like dark romance, abusive language, self harm, depression, anxiety, heavy smut, male pregnancy, polygamous, ghostships, or anything like that which are prone to trigger some people out in the world (Self-safety Purpose)
          • After the that please give Introduction of characters like just some of the main characters and supporting characters with photos  (source them from internet) and write briefly about them like name, age, family background, nature/character, etc.
          • Then start writing your Main chapters with name.
          { Chapter __: Name of the character }
          Try to keep you each chapters long, describe emotions more, don't cut the scene instantly short, use emoji in between if you like, write perspective of a character if needed, write angst and yearning or downbadism in more detail and more emotions.....
          • Abut Smut chapters please give heads-up na....
          Like some emoji in chapter name  [///♨️/] and Warning on the top like " This is Smut or adult chapter (emoji)"
          And try to keep these chapters enough long for the readers cause why not readers crave these.

azaleaa47

I miss you @assi1230 hope your exams went well

assi1230

@azaleaa47 I'm really sorry for late but whenever I got time I'll definitely update. The main problem is that , it's actually a long time to leave this story and for new update I've to read the whole story then I can update and I don't have proper time for this but still I'll try
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