asterblanc74

Title: Heart-swapped!
          	Author: @oohdoodle
          	Tags: lgbtq+, gay, bodyswap, humor
          	Rating: pg13
          	
          	SUMMARY:
          	
          	Two things everybody knows about Jay(ishiku) Park: Exceptional student and changed school more than eight times. Which, sort of, makes him an extraordinary person. 
          	
          	Two things everybody knows about Oliver Wong: He used to be Jay Park's ex-best friend and...that's about it. Nothing makes him extraordinary, he'd say.
          	
          	When Jay Park wakes up the next morning after his birthday, he discovers three things:
          	1. He is not in his room.
          	2. He is not in his body.
          	3. Oliver Wong sleeps naked.
          	
          	Out of all the bodies Jay could've woken up in, his oh-so-wonderful fate decided to put him in his ex-best friend's body (not like that) whom he once had a crush on.  
          	
          	Sometimes it takes a birthday wish and a whole another level of chaos to make the wrong things, right again.
          	
          	
          	link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/270499271-heart-swapped

asterblanc74

Title: Heart-swapped!
          Author: @oohdoodle
          Tags: lgbtq+, gay, bodyswap, humor
          Rating: pg13
          
          SUMMARY:
          
          Two things everybody knows about Jay(ishiku) Park: Exceptional student and changed school more than eight times. Which, sort of, makes him an extraordinary person. 
          
          Two things everybody knows about Oliver Wong: He used to be Jay Park's ex-best friend and...that's about it. Nothing makes him extraordinary, he'd say.
          
          When Jay Park wakes up the next morning after his birthday, he discovers three things:
          1. He is not in his room.
          2. He is not in his body.
          3. Oliver Wong sleeps naked.
          
          Out of all the bodies Jay could've woken up in, his oh-so-wonderful fate decided to put him in his ex-best friend's body (not like that) whom he once had a crush on.  
          
          Sometimes it takes a birthday wish and a whole another level of chaos to make the wrong things, right again.
          
          
          link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/270499271-heart-swapped

antixero

You might like my story, it’s called Dying Wish. Whenever you find a sec, feel free to jump in just trying to improve my writing. Feedback is the best!

asterblanc74

@antixero idk if that link would work or not, but the story is Heart-swapped! (It's in my Check it out list)
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asterblanc74

@antixero hello! I've added your book to my reading list and I'll check it out soon and will try my best to comment my feedbacks^^
            
            
            If possible, can you did the same for my story as well?
            Here's the link, just in case you wish to check out:)
            
            https://www.wattpad.com/story/270499271?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=asterblanc74&wp_originator=zYoS3tSa2qB3Tz0Lcwhpp4uCR57CoEd%2BId9TRIIia%2B0Z%2FM4w6UGeDT1Aur4cW6e4OyCFHqFFhDNJFdBKomnkYK1bEVgoPS%2Bfu0WxoZ2p1xeKiAHS9ooe3ZNQdBPUgsuV
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