hi <3 i'm sorry to bother you, but could you maybe check out my friends new story and even tell her what you think about it? of course i'll return the favour! thank you x http://my.w.tt/UiNb/WW2VgpJ5OB
my new story is basically something that I did before but deleted it. I unpublished cliché because I was unhappy on how it was going so I'll hopefully review it soon and see what I can improve