milroymelena
Hey! How are doing?! I'm the one writing: She led me to him. Thank you so much for the likes on the first part of the book, I've seen that you added the book on the "Don't like category." If you could help by giving me right feedback I would be grateful.
Anyway thank you for your insight!
milroymelena
Thank you so much ! It would help me a lot. I started writing this when I wasn’t that good and a bit immature. You are right the characters only starts to connect later on as to show their development. Maybe it is lack of skills haha. But the book needs editing so I will keep it mind when coming back to the first chapters
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asuna551
@milroymelena Hey! Thanks for reaching out. I actually liked the plot and found the idea of the story really exciting! However, I put it in the "Don’t like" category because the characters’ behavior and development felt a bit off to me. They didn’t really act in a way that matched how they were described in the summary — especially the main characters. Their personalities and thoughts seemed to change too often, and it felt like none of them really tried to understand each other or think deeply about their actions. Also, the relationships between characters (of any kind) felt a bit cold and emotionless, like everyone was just playing a part rather than truly connecting. I hope that helps explain my feedback! Thank you again for your message and for being open to hearing readers’ thoughts.
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