asuna551

Can someone please recommend to me Aslan x oc stories?

milroymelena

Hey! How are doing?! I'm the one writing: She led me to him. Thank you so much for the likes on the first part of the book, I've seen that you added the book on the "Don't like category." If you could help by giving me right feedback I would be grateful.
          Anyway thank you for your insight!

milroymelena

Thank you so much ! It would help me a lot. I started writing this when I wasn’t that good and a bit immature. You are right the characters only starts to connect later on as to show their development. Maybe it is lack of skills haha. But the book needs editing so I will keep it mind when coming back to the first chapters
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asuna551

@milroymelena 
            Hey! Thanks for reaching out. I actually liked the plot and found the idea of the story really exciting! However, I put it in the "Don’t like" category because the characters’ behavior and development felt a bit off to me. They didn’t really act in a way that matched how they were described in the summary — especially the main characters.
            Their personalities and thoughts seemed to change too often, and it felt like none of them really tried to understand each other or think deeply about their actions. Also, the relationships between characters (of any kind) felt a bit cold and emotionless, like everyone was just playing a part rather than truly connecting.
            I hope that helps explain my feedback! Thank you again for your message and for being open to hearing readers’ thoughts.
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Berry_writes00

Hiiiii please please please read my book. 
          
          I am really new and small writer and that's why I have to reach out to you like this. I hope you don't mind. 
          It's an adult romance novel between a badass lawyer and her very hot and sexy Client. I am sure it's not gonna disappoint you if you give it a read. 
          
          Thankyouuu so muchhhh. Also please comment your views of you do decide it to read. Thanks alot

ThereIsHappiness

Heyy, thanks for voting on Legendary!! Hope u liked it xx

ThereIsHappiness

@asuna551 awwww tysm u don't know how much that means to me ❤️‍
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asuna551

@ThereIsHappiness You're truly welcome♡ I love this story so much, and I'm so excited to read more ♡♡♡♡♡
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Vialacteaaa

Hello! Sorry for plugging, but I just want to promote my story here. 
          
          Please read the story description to entertain you more into reading it. I hope this still can catch your attention despite the low reads. (Just published this week ago and on going, but I do fast updates.) THANK YOU SO MUCH!!
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/358520078?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=AlviaLactea&wp_originator=8kog6Uekdczjlp7YQ9vk8iMQnWlmFCxmtp9OIkmcULouGNjbVryK7Po3G1DC7DBSpY9hY5Jgih8jupTZ0L%2BqwiZ5QCZGqWSYiAdRi4ZQ%2B1plZotGP4PCxhLMbay0%2BAPW