ate_vi98

For poetry readers out there, I have a couple of poems I hope you would like. Enjoy!

Kyouna_yoyo

Hey. My fav ice cream is pecan vanilla

ate_vi98

@EmeveNature havent tasted sherbet yet. but i love bubblegum and coffee crumble :)))
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Kyouna_yoyo

@EmeveNature Its my favorite, next to it is chocolate and sherbet. 
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ate_vi98

@EmeveNature havent tasteed that yet :)
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baldfiction

Hi Vi! I think....(I think lang, ah) go easy on the revealing part. Like, what the boy's hobbies are. Or what Tori's sister thinks of her... Leave an air of mystery and just tell facts that are really needed for the plot. Other than that, the pacing is good. It's not dragging at all. :D

ate_vi98

Thanks! will keep that in mind! :)
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