@ CipherStudiozz03 ok ok so I want to go over the first question. YES, it sure is a good start for a fantasy book, the only thing is, some little details are, well, really empty. For example, I wished that cypress cooked foods that are...well...Let's just say non human. Like idk weird magic food( and it's kind of impossible for cypress to cook human food. Since you said that cypress didn't go to the human world to get a rabbit or something like that, then cypress probably didn't get human food at all unless the world is an exact copy of the human world like they have bananas and oranges, etc. So you should probably explain more of the world to us, like how does it look like? And second of all I would LOOOOOOVEEEEEE IT if you use urban legends, stories, etc. For ocs. For example the Adam and Eve apple story. MAKE THE DEVIL REALM FULL OF APPLES. Or Hanako san, make a ghost hunting the castles restroom. I bet everyone would love seeing something like that.