atsumio

I didn't update today i hate myself so much wtf i hate school 

EmilyFalkenrath

Hi!
          I just checked out your Yuri Plisetsky story. Let me just start by saying that I really like the way you write, and despite what you said about your English, you have an excellent grammar! 
          I really liked how you're getting into the character, describing her as well her thoughts and main problems. However, I noticed you start the story with a bit of a delicate situation, which is suicide. It's fine for you to write of it, but I suggest you place a warning in your disclaimer chapter since some people could be offended or triggered, and that wouldn't be nice.
          But again, your way of writing is close to flawless and I encourage you to continue your story!! Congrats!
          --Emily Falkenrath

atsumio

thank you so so much! this really means a lot to me! 
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