@lena_Estella yeah love!!! So instead of using "said" or "says" try to use different words to describe their action, (shout, demanded, whined, whimpered, babbled, confessed, claimed, added, advised, explained, etc). Try to draw a picture of the scenery. Where is this person at? Are they sitting? Describe how their posture is or if the chair is uncomfortable under them. Are they walking? Do their feet hurt? Do they know where they are going? It takes time and it's completely okay to rewrite some parts. I did it all the time!!! My first story was rusty the second one was better because of that, we all need to start somewhere. Once you get the hang of it you will find your writing style. With smut it's more about what the person feels. How does the person's skin feel on theirs? Sweat, heat, and most importantly words!!! You could describe their actions and what they are doing but what they are saying to each other really sells it. I hope that helped even just a lil my Instagram is audriscus if you need to message me for more tips!! ♡♡
