audriscus

So freaking close to 60k reads on snakes will sing!!!! Thank you so much!! I love you

audriscus

"Wait for me" but it's Tom looking for her for weeks while she's being held by the ministry.....ARE WE PICKING UP WHAT IM PUTTING DOWN. Omg someone make an edit and tag me on tiktok bro my handle is audriscus same as here I need to this chat

audriscus

Hello my lovelies!! Im sorry I've been away for so long, I had a couple things come up and then another and now we're here. I apologize for inactivity but I promised you all a 40s era of Tom Riddle and I stay true to my word and I will be releasing shortly. In the meantime I strongly suggest ready my Lorenzo Berkshire fic if you love him or simply love slow burn friends to lovers. I'll be releasing another chapter later this week until then ♡♡♡ mwah!! -audriscus

audriscus

Hi lovelies if you haven't already i suggest reading my Lorenzo Berkshire story. I promise it's worth it. I have a couple chapters out now, it's a slow burn friends to lovers (sooooo muchhhhh yearning) and if you are wondering about another Tom Riddle fic, I will be writing the student era of Tom soon. Keep a look out for 'We and the Shadows' during Christmas. But as for now if you love Lorenzo as much as i do please read 'Third shelf, fourth book, my name inside'. -audriscus (and have a very happy Thanksgiving) ♡♡♡♡

SophiaBurke1801

@audriscus will do i'm gonna finish some books first the read but I definitely have it on my list
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audriscus

@KatnissMeadows1 Thank YOU. I have so much love and ideas for Lorenzo. Trust in Lorenzo's and Aurelia's story it's a slow burn friends to lovers keep a watch out for new chapters and the songs in the intro will make sense <3
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SophiaBurke1801

@audriscus omg i'v also been looking for that type of book I feel like no one will ever give him enough love I will definitely read it thank you
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lena_Estella

Omg I need help I don't know if my stories sound good. I keep reading and reading and it sounds like a fourth grader that wrote it, and I keep publishing and unpublishing because I feel insecure about my writing. Can you give me some advice?

lena_Estella

Thank you! Ill keep them in mind while I write.
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audriscus

@lena_Estella yeah love!!! So instead of using "said" or "says" try to use different words to describe their action, (shout, demanded, whined, whimpered, babbled, confessed, claimed, added, advised, explained, etc). Try to draw a picture of the scenery. Where is this person at? Are they sitting? Describe how their posture is or if the chair is uncomfortable under them. Are they walking? Do their feet hurt? Do they know where they are going? It takes time and it's completely okay to rewrite some parts. I did it all the time!!! My first story was rusty the second one was better because of that, we all need to start somewhere. Once you get the hang of it you will find your writing style. With smut it's more about what the person feels. How does the person's skin feel on theirs? Sweat, heat, and most importantly words!!! You could describe their actions and what they are doing but what they are saying to each other really sells it. I hope that helped even just a lil my Instagram is audriscus if you need to message me for more tips!! ♡♡
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audriscus

Hey guysss.........so....dont be mad at me we knew it was going to have a tragic ending  BUT my stories are not finished yet.....*evil laughter* something special is coming soon!!!

audriscus

@OdieClara you'll be seeing it soonnnnnn  ;))
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audriscus

@OdieClara it had to happen
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OdieClara

@audriscus but as for the new series
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