audriscus

Hi lovelies if you haven't already i suggest reading my Lorenzo Berkshire story. I promise it's worth it. I have a couple chapters out now, it's a slow burn friends to lovers (sooooo muchhhhh yearning) and if you are wondering about another Tom Riddle fic, I will be writing the student era of Tom soon. Keep a look out for 'We and the Shadows' during Christmas. But as for now if you love Lorenzo as much as i do please read 'Third shelf, fourth book, my name inside'. -audriscus (and have a very happy Thanksgiving) ♡♡♡♡

KatnissMeadows1

@audriscus will do i'm gonna finish some books first the read but I definitely have it on my list
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audriscus

@KatnissMeadows1 Thank YOU. I have so much love and ideas for Lorenzo. Trust in Lorenzo's and Aurelia's story it's a slow burn friends to lovers keep a watch out for new chapters and the songs in the intro will make sense <3
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KatnissMeadows1

@audriscus omg i'v also been looking for that type of book I feel like no one will ever give him enough love I will definitely read it thank you
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audriscus

Hi lovelies if you haven't already i suggest reading my Lorenzo Berkshire story. I promise it's worth it. I have a couple chapters out now, it's a slow burn friends to lovers (sooooo muchhhhh yearning) and if you are wondering about another Tom Riddle fic, I will be writing the student era of Tom soon. Keep a look out for 'We and the Shadows' during Christmas. But as for now if you love Lorenzo as much as i do please read 'Third shelf, fourth book, my name inside'. -audriscus (and have a very happy Thanksgiving) ♡♡♡♡

KatnissMeadows1

@audriscus will do i'm gonna finish some books first the read but I definitely have it on my list
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audriscus

@KatnissMeadows1 Thank YOU. I have so much love and ideas for Lorenzo. Trust in Lorenzo's and Aurelia's story it's a slow burn friends to lovers keep a watch out for new chapters and the songs in the intro will make sense <3
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KatnissMeadows1

@audriscus omg i'v also been looking for that type of book I feel like no one will ever give him enough love I will definitely read it thank you
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lena_Estella

Omg I need help I don't know if my stories sound good. I keep reading and reading and it sounds like a fourth grader that wrote it, and I keep publishing and unpublishing because I feel insecure about my writing. Can you give me some advice?

lena_Estella

Thank you! Ill keep them in mind while I write.
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audriscus

@lena_Estella yeah love!!! So instead of using "said" or "says" try to use different words to describe their action, (shout, demanded, whined, whimpered, babbled, confessed, claimed, added, advised, explained, etc). Try to draw a picture of the scenery. Where is this person at? Are they sitting? Describe how their posture is or if the chair is uncomfortable under them. Are they walking? Do their feet hurt? Do they know where they are going? It takes time and it's completely okay to rewrite some parts. I did it all the time!!! My first story was rusty the second one was better because of that, we all need to start somewhere. Once you get the hang of it you will find your writing style. With smut it's more about what the person feels. How does the person's skin feel on theirs? Sweat, heat, and most importantly words!!! You could describe their actions and what they are doing but what they are saying to each other really sells it. I hope that helped even just a lil my Instagram is audriscus if you need to message me for more tips!! ♡♡
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audriscus

Hey guysss.........so....dont be mad at me we knew it was going to have a tragic ending  BUT my stories are not finished yet.....*evil laughter* something special is coming soon!!!

audriscus

@OdieClara you'll be seeing it soonnnnnn  ;))
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OdieClara

@audriscus but as for the new series 
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lena_Estella

Hey  Im Lena and I came up with a book that is called Song of Snakes and if to similar to your title, just say the word and  ill change it.   

audriscus

@lena_Estella hii as long as the story isn't similar I see nothing wrong with it ‍♀️ I can understand some stories have the same title but as long as our stories are different I don't think there is anything wrong with it. Happy writing!!
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audriscus

Oh chat....MMMM I'm starting the playlist for the Lorenzo fic.... y'all AIN'T READY!!! 

readerpumpkinzsgsks

NO THANK YOUUU<33333  YOU ARE MY FAVORITE AUTHOR LITERALLY.
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audriscus

@readerpumpkinzsgsks omggg thank youuu that means so much!! Next song of the snakes chapter will be out today and a new tom and Lorenzo fic will be in the works!!! Thank you for your support ilysm <333!!!
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readerpumpkinzsgsks

YES NEW TOM FAN FIC PLEASE I'M OBSESSED I LOVE THE CURRENT ONE AND I LOVE YOU. YOUR STORY MAKES MY DAYS FUN THANK YOU SO MUCH. YOUR WRITING STYLE IS SOO GOOD. PLEASE MAKE A HAPPY ENDING IF IT WILL END BADLY I WILL CRY. 
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audriscus

Hi lovelies I know we aren't finished yet with the snakes series but for my next book how do we feel about a 1940s Tom student era book or Lorenzo Berkshire friends to lovers book? Or both ;)? 

audriscus

@Moody105 <3 thank you!! A new chapter for the snakes series will be out super duper soon but I have so many ideas I hope y'all love 
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Moody105

@audriscus Oh I will love to read a 1940s Tom student era book ! Even if a Lorenzo book would be incredible too. Ugh, the choice is so hard but thanks to your talent, the both would be great ! <3
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audriscus

@OdieClara ugh ilysm  I will be doing both when the snakes series is finished keep an eye out 
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