shuyi_
Hello, I am Shuyi. Would you be able to do me a favor? I know this is a bit of a request, but I was hoping you could give my story a try.
I badly want to improve my writing, so I truly need genuine critiques for my work.
This is my work:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/404005326?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=shuyi_
It would be a pleasure to receive your genuine thoughts!
Thank you!