aundreyy

I've only got ten chapters left to edit friends! We're almost there!

Thatsjustme1

I LOVE Ariel and the Bandits, but I’m like the most impatient person there is. I was wondering if you had the old version in your drafts?

Thatsjustme1

I understand :(. I absolutely LOVE the story 
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aundreyy

@Thatsjustme1 I do! I've just reached a point  where the story is no longer taking the same route to the ending that none of it would make sense.
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ghost_of_lauren

Hii! I just wanna ask if "Ariel and The Bandits" is done? Btw, it looks like such an amazing story, I will definitely read it when it's finished :D

aundreyy

Hello! My first draft is done, but I’m currently going through edits! So I update as soon as I edit a chapter, I’m moving at a slower pace than I’d like but the goal is to have it all up by the start of summer! 
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idontakecrap

Just finished Ariel & the Bandits in like 5 hours!! One of the best books on Wattpad. I just love the healthy masculinity showcased in the books. Also how realistically and age appropriate the characters behave - being a twenty something myself could definitely relate. Can't wait to see what you’ll do with Liam’s story.

aundreyy

@idontakecrap Ahhh this makes me so happy to hear! This just made my week *tries not to cry*  The healthy masculinity among my characters was something I really wanted present. Since I'm doing edits for Ariel and the Bandits, so Liam's story will be on hold for a little bit(but the outline is ready!).
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aundreyy

I will be temporarily taking down Ariel and the Bandits starting March 22 to make some changes to the story(because the writer in me knows it can be better). I have been thinking about this a lot lately and I feel like there are moments that need more elaboration, characters that need more description, and character relationships/dynamics that need exploration. 
          
          So, when will all the chapters be posted back up again? Not sure. I'm trying to make edits now, so I can update a good chunk of the story all at once. Will the plot be different? Not very-- unless I have a Godsend epiphany. Will you be getting longer chapters? Potentially. Will there be new chapters? Definitely. 
          
          So if you've already read all through Ariel and the Bandits make sure to keep an eye out on those updates and chapters ;)
          
          Thanks for the support!

julietter04

hi, so i was reading chapter 19 and 20 of Ariel and the Bandits and i’m just a little confused. i don’t know what Ariel did or what she didn’t do to make him disappointed or mad. if you could maybe give a little info that would be greatly appreciated!
          fyi i love the book!

julietter04

okay thank you so much for clearing that up
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aundreyy

In other words, you feel confused because he is too haha 
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aundreyy

@julietter04 Gotcha. So Oliver doesn’t know how to process what he just saw. He needs a clear head to really think about what happened. And he’s hurt because she lied. The clarification is more present in chapter 23 once he’s had more time to figure out what he’s feeling 
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