Zemodalen
So, a more in-depth analysis of why I love your fic so much. Firstly, the writing is amazing. The grammar, usage, and even the basic mechanics of it make me jealous. The way you give just the right amount if detail, with out over or under doing it, is amazing. Next, I love how you portray Hanako as a character. I feel like he is very accurately shown through your writing and through your story. The dynamics and interactions between him and y/n are just perfect. They leave you on the edge of your seat, wishing for more. Speaking of y/n, I also love how she is portrayed. Your took the Komi aspect and ran with it, and I love it. The way that you described even miniscule things really breathed life into her. I sometimes have trouble reading xreader fics because they often times get a bit cringey, but I didn't feel that at all with your fic, which I loved. Next, I loved the way you used the story. You used the TBHK story, but you tweaked it enough that reading felt new and different from the anime/manga, yet still recognizable. A lot of people try to stick too closely to the actual story and end up just making a repeat, boring the reader.
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@Zemodalen ur actually just way too sweet ilysm. it's nice to know someone out there actually enjoyed one of my fics i honestly thought the storyline was kinda shit but tysm for actually finding it good ahhhh. ILYYYY
Zemodalen
@Zemodalen I LOVED the in-universe explanation for the ears usually used to help express Komi. The concept was very interesting, and worked well with the rest of the plot. It had the potential to feel more, "Hybrid Princess Alpha Soulmate Super Special y/n", in the way of y/n getting a bunch of random cool things just for being y/n, but it definitely didn't, which was very impressive. It's very hard to give y/n any type of unique attributes without her feeling like a snowflake, but you did it beautifully. I'm curious to see where you would go with that in the future, and how that would play into the rest of the plot. I do sincerely hope that you pic writing back up, because your skill is truly admirable. I envy your writing and storytelling greatly. Please take this lightly, I'm just one person's opinion and I'm not meaning to be critical in any way. Sorry for the long post as well lol. Keep up the good work !! <3
