I really enjoyed your book. Although there are a few grammar mistakes and some sentences could flow more smoothly, it didn’t take away from the overall experience. This isn’t usually my preferred genre, but your story actually made me appreciate it.
The chemistry between the male lead and female lead is chef’s kiss it feels natural and engaging. I also loved her best friend; she’s incredibly sweet, and the dynamics within both families are quite intriguing.
I would suggest polishing the grammar a bit, as it still feels like a first draft in some places. With a little refinement, this story can truly shine.