author_28

Guys, I am trying to post updates but there's some glitch ig...I will try to post it today only and if the problem is not solved I will post it by tomorrow.. Stay Tuned!

Akanksha_jha7

Writer I want to tell you something. Don't take it in a negative way. But I genuinely feel disconnected from the lead characters in your current plot, after their wedding. 
          I have read the story from the start, but I think after marriage they seem to be different people. It's not about intimacy but the amout of conversations and type of conversations they are having, it's like they are both strangers who suddenly got married in an arrange marriage. They know each other from school for God's sake. They both were craving to be together and now that they are, this is how they start their marriage life, saying good night to each other in hall after having all the wedding functions? Seriously. You need to improve their conversation quality please. I liked story but now I don't feel connected to them.

author_28

@Akanksha_jha7 Thank you so much for being this honest with me ❤️ And please don't worry, I’m not taking it negatively at all. In fact, I genuinely appreciate that you took the time to explain what felt off to you.
            
            I completely understand what you mean about Sidharth and Shehnaaz’s conversations after marriage. I’ll definitely work on improving their bond, conversations and emotional connection. There is actually a reason why I’ve kept their conversations a little minimal for now. After around 4–5 chapters, you’re going to see a completely different side of both of them, and I was trying to build towards that gradually. 🥹
            
            But I do understand your point that their conversations and connection still need to feel more natural even before that. So I’ll definitely improve that part in the upcoming chapters and make sure their relationship doesn’t feel like two strangers who suddenly got married. ❤️
            
            Thank you for telling me this instead of simply leaving the story. Feedback like this genuinely helps me understand what my readers are feeling, and I really appreciate it. 🫶🏻
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havennirella

Every now and then a book on Wattpad feels like a hidden gem  yours does. I noticed how much work you’ve put into. your book  yet it hasn’t gathered the number of reviews and visibility it truly deserves. Algorithms can be merciless, right? They don’t even drink coffee! ☕
          
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author_28

@havennirella 
            Thank you for your kind words.. I will surely contact the cordinator..
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havennirella

@soul_25  well I am one of the community readers of Jessica   and she is our coordinator. the reason why I message you is that I love your book that is why I told her and the other community readers and they all agreed to read your book and leave honest review 
            
            For more information contact our community Coordinator lunessajessica@gmail.com
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author_28

@havennirella Hi Haven,
            
            Thank you so much for your kind words about my book! It truly means a lot to me that you noticed the effort I’ve put into it. Yes, I’d definitely be open to chatting about ways to grow my book’s audience. Please let me know how we can connect further.
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