A little suggestions, first make plots, storylines then start writing a story. I'm confused don't mind but what you're trying to show in the story. I will help to guide you if you need. Gonna talk in ig for discussion.
@Inaam_khan Obsession In white... It's just kinda messy.... You directly jumped up, you should have explained your character, written clear dialogues...
Hey!!
Would you like to give chance to story ?
It's about a girl called Alya Noor she lives a normal life… or at least, that’s what she’s told.
But something feels wrong She forgets things she shouldn’t. She feels things that don’t belong to her.And the more she tries to understand…the more her mind starts to slip.
Then there’s Zeyan. Someone who looks at her like he already knows her story…even the parts she doesn’t remember.
Give it try plz thank you
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409992099?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=S4vdaa