author_devol08

Inaam_khan

A little suggestions, first make plots, storylines then start writing a story. I'm confused don't mind but what you're trying to show in the story. I will help to guide  you if you need. Gonna talk in ig for discussion. 

author_devol08

@Inaam_khan ok I'll try my best thanks for the feedback
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Inaam_khan

@Inaam_khan Obsession In white... It's just kinda messy.... You directly jumped up, you should have explained your character, written clear dialogues... 
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author_devol08

@Inaam_khan hey will you tell me why are you want to give me suggestions. Didnt you like my book? If yes then which one 
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S4vdaa

          Hey!!
          
          Would you like to give chance to story ?
          It's about  a girl called Alya Noor she lives a normal life… or at least, that’s what she’s told.
          But something feels wrong  She forgets things she shouldn’t. She feels things that don’t belong to her.And the more she tries to understand…the more her mind starts to slip.
          Then there’s Zeyan. Someone who looks at her like he already knows her story…even the parts she doesn’t remember. 
          Give it try plz thank you 
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/409992099?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=S4vdaa

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