Babysis your story was damn good!!!! I love it so much from past few days I was reading it I was so into the story that I forgot to vote and comment just did it....... keep it up my dear I love it so much!!!!
@MiliWilson hi unnie I am ella I am 14 years old. I love if you read it. And I would love if you tell me how is it though. ( Including pointing out the mistakes)