@author_hardika
Why your all story is about cubby girl and the man who love her madly which make her forget all her flaws of begin fat ..... Really saying it's all delusional but it make my heart believe that every cubby( fat ) girl has a man who can love her madly let's see if there is anyone who can love me like the way describe in your stories by the way your stories are amazing
I will update on Wednesday :)
Apologies for slow updates
Been busy with works
@author_hardika no problem author sis we can wait stay safe and healthy keep smiling ❤️✨
Hey update please author
Hey do u know story if a widow mother her adult daughter and two roommate boys the story name was aapke aa jane se or some old hindi song title
Hello!! Hope you're doing well. I've just updated my story. Do check it out. Hope you'll enjoy it. Thank you so much ♥️
https://www.wattpad.com/story/399433522?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=PetalsOfRosy
Hey author_hardika I read your story Cravings of a village heart,the core idea is nice but the execution is not as same as the core idea. The way you presented the story is poor and u mainly focused on the physical intimacy part. The characterisation of the characters are extremely weak. Let me tell you one thing no good guy calls his women s**t or w**re and no women can take these degrading words. Ur main goal I can see only is the intimacy part, and marriage or love is not about intimacy it is about sharing their completeness and u didnt execute it properly.
Coming to the writing format, those problems are extremely exaggerated. No proper world building u just mentioned place like lotus pond that's it u didn't focus on the exploration. Overall the story didn't feel like real,it felt like forced.And one more thing Let the readers see and feel the trauma unless instead of saying I m sad show us the sadness like my eyes shed tears and my inhaling became difficult... in this way and don't add due to sadness it will break the emotion
I m saying this because ur ideas are good but ur direction is wrong for me,If it felt right for u okk byee. For writing advices watch Abbie emmons videos in youtube. That's it .ALL THE BEST BYEE
@achieverguy8 I think you should try her on going story "Painted Numbers Fated Hearts" it's a awesome story with every emotion and feeling that you are trying to find in her other books. Which she writes when she was just a beginner.. just a suggestion from me, hope so you will not get offend.
Apologies for using author's message board for promoting my book...
If you can support me please I would be really grateful...as I'm looking forward to more exposures
https://www.wattpad.com/story/406739037?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Kyth_darkverse
Hello Everyone, Apologies I will try to upload regularly from Feb first week.
@author_hardika okay writer thanks for the information we are desperately waiting for the next updates
