Hey hi I know I knowone to give suggestions or correcting your book but you know I like your concepts or stories but you know you just rush the things which makes the thing absurd like take example of his seductress, the concept was nice but you ,just think you are in her place and will you just let any you met just 10min let him touch you yup love at first sight is possible but even it will be love at first sight no girl will let other men touch her even if she is alone for her whole life and that doesn't mean your story is not nice it was nice but it's just my suggestion that don't the things take it slow then I am telling you your book will be mor fabulous
That doesn't mean they are not fabulous now
And I am sorry if I talked too much it's just a suggestion
If you want you can take it if not it's ok just ignore
Not hate for you
And don't hate me , again it's just a suggestion
Thankyou and sorry