@kookiii_v hell, i think you are the only one who is reading my book lol.. tbh, I am changing the storyline a bit because when I read my outline i realised there's not much of twist or suspense, it was all about their struggle, healing, family love, siblings comedy, and a lovely love story. Everything i wanted to have but not much of twist or some shocking scenes..you know...? So I am thinking to change it a bit...like.., including some betrayal of loved one or maybe manipulation, downfall..or anything. Literally but I can't think of any ...like I can't think of proper outline of a character which will be pain in a #...I don't know who it should be out of my characters...also I am thinking about Vyom book too. I was planning his book as well. Also I am rewriting the chapters. I have already written second chapter "home?" Again. And truly I think it's good or maybe it isn't? I am greedy I want it to be perfect lol don't mind. We I will repost second chapter again. I hope you will read it again and i am sorry for late response. I love you sooo much.... Thank you for reading my book. I will try my best to write as good as I can . I hope i won't disappoint you