author_nyraa
@byzuwa aapki instagram I'd hai sister
author_nyraa
author_nyraa
@byzuwa thank u so much zuwa . Aapki khub sukriya aapne meko meri galti batayi okay but i want to tell that ki meko help chahiye aapse toh please meko baat karni hai aapse sikhna hai
author_nyraa
Guys aapko kaisa lag raha hai story
byzuwa
@author_nyraa ji m insta p hu @authorzuwa k nam s ..apko mere bio m mere insta ka link b milega ..aur m jahn p apki help krsakti hu ..m zaroor krungi ...u can contact me any time
byzuwa
@author_nyraa hy author i read ur story ..and I m also a new writer and I want to suggest u something ..don't take it as criticism ( m b koi top most writer nhi hu but as a reader jo mji lga I want to convey u) ..ur story has great plot but ap ki reach kam is liyai h kunki apki story continuation m chl rhi h ..scenes k beech thoda sa break to ap taki reader samg patai kya hua ..aur kuch line some dots add kro next scene start krnain s pehlai us s reader ko lgta h ki han next scene start hua and one more thing ap n story m kam hastages use kiyai try to use more jo apki story s relatable h ..and by the grace of God ap ki reach badegi ..lastly m phr s yehi kahungi ki m n criticism nhi kiya kunki m us laya nhi ki kisi ko criticise kru but as a reader jo mji lga m n woh kha ..apko b agar mere story m koi kami nazar ayegi ..u r free to tell me ..m apni galtiyu s hi sekhti hu love from zuwa