I'm mad!!! I need more!!! Stop playing with me Honey!!! I'm going to need you to continue writing this EXPEDITIOUSLY!!! Honestly, I love the storyline! I'm impressed at how you started with an attention-grabbing scene, but I'm even more impressed with how you held my attention throughout the story. Great job!!! Being sheltered myself with older first cousins who as close as brothers and hood to the core, I could definitely relate to this. The only issue was the grammatical errors, but that's what editors are for anyway. Besides, the story was so good, the errors were so easy to ignore. That means a lot, because it's hard for me to ignore my own grammatical errors. All in all, you definitely did your thing , and you can count on me to be tuned in!