authorevanna

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authorevanna

@justtonemorechapter sure you don't have to apologise 
            Pls do read my book as well and recommend it you readers as well and pls do follow me 
            
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_amaira__

Hey!! I read your book ‘is it forever’ . And as you asked for some suggestions, I think you should add some more detailing to your words. And do some picturing if possible. Also try to cook the scenes don’t leave them raw. 
          
          Hope this will help you to make your book more enjoyable. 
          
          Hoping to see you shining!! 

authorevanna

@_amaira__  Thank you so much i would surely consider your suggestion. 
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