authorkrizella

Hii darlings,
          	
          	Only read if you have enough time to waste your time (if that makes any sense?).
          	
          	Well, where do I start?
          	I thought it would be easy to write after making an outline of my story… everything is planned, but the problem is how to write all this. I wrote Chapter 1 and realised it’s not how I wanted it to be. The way I am thinking about the story… I am not able to write it the way I have imagined.
          	
          	Eg,
          	
          	I wrote: a tadpole is behind another tadpole doing nothing.
          	I want to write: a tadpole is just behind the other tadpole… intensely staring at him. Why? Is he trying to hurt him? Or is there something else entirely? What is his motive?…
          	
          	
          	But aaaaahhhhhh, I am not able to do so. Chapter 1 feels horrible. I read it and see that it’s not the way I imagined it… but I don’t want to waste my time on Chapter 1 because I know I won’t stop until it’s so-called “perfect". After looking at the emotions I have portrayed in it, I realised it was not supposed to be sweet but serious. How do I write something serious? Despite reading "serious" storylines a thousand times, I am still not able to write even a percent of it.
          	
          	Well, let’s see where this will go… all I can do right now is continue, otherwise I won’t be able to finish what I’ve started. And this time, I don’t want that. 
          	
          	I’ve already wasted almost a month… and if you have any suggestions, do share. I need it.
          	Thanks for reading till here.
          	
          	
          	Signing off,
          	Krisella

authorkrizella

@DaisyDayNew Well, I got some clarity. I mean, I agree with your points—after all, what is a story without its characters? I realized that I used many POVs in just one chapter which made me confused about how does a character feel in certain situation? I totally forgot what are my character's wants or needs something (what is their motive? Is there a reason they are here??) . It felt like they were simply there, existing without any backstory without any specific reason. I just need to figure out my characters and go into detail about their strengths, their powers, their values, and how they behave in certain situations also their backstory. 
          	  Thank you so much. It did helped me in many ways. Thank you again for taking your time to reply.
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authorkrizella

Hii darlings,
          
          Only read if you have enough time to waste your time (if that makes any sense?).
          
          Well, where do I start?
          I thought it would be easy to write after making an outline of my story… everything is planned, but the problem is how to write all this. I wrote Chapter 1 and realised it’s not how I wanted it to be. The way I am thinking about the story… I am not able to write it the way I have imagined.
          
          Eg,
          
          I wrote: a tadpole is behind another tadpole doing nothing.
          I want to write: a tadpole is just behind the other tadpole… intensely staring at him. Why? Is he trying to hurt him? Or is there something else entirely? What is his motive?…
          
          
          But aaaaahhhhhh, I am not able to do so. Chapter 1 feels horrible. I read it and see that it’s not the way I imagined it… but I don’t want to waste my time on Chapter 1 because I know I won’t stop until it’s so-called “perfect". After looking at the emotions I have portrayed in it, I realised it was not supposed to be sweet but serious. How do I write something serious? Despite reading "serious" storylines a thousand times, I am still not able to write even a percent of it.
          
          Well, let’s see where this will go… all I can do right now is continue, otherwise I won’t be able to finish what I’ve started. And this time, I don’t want that. 
          
          I’ve already wasted almost a month… and if you have any suggestions, do share. I need it.
          Thanks for reading till here.
          
          
          Signing off,
          Krisella

authorkrizella

@DaisyDayNew Well, I got some clarity. I mean, I agree with your points—after all, what is a story without its characters? I realized that I used many POVs in just one chapter which made me confused about how does a character feel in certain situation? I totally forgot what are my character's wants or needs something (what is their motive? Is there a reason they are here??) . It felt like they were simply there, existing without any backstory without any specific reason. I just need to figure out my characters and go into detail about their strengths, their powers, their values, and how they behave in certain situations also their backstory. 
            Thank you so much. It did helped me in many ways. Thank you again for taking your time to reply.
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authorkrizella

@DaisyDayNew Hiii…
          I am doing good. How are you?
          About republishing my books,well, it will take some time because I am busy. I am planning to complete them first and then publish them. Otherwise, I might never be able to publish them. So please wait for one more month. As I planned, I have worked on the plot this time, and I have an idea that you might like. I am really excited about it.
          Thank you so much for asking. Right now, I am just making blueprints for the chapters because this time I really want to finish it without any regret.

authorkrizella

Hi lovely people,
          I’ve decided to unpublish both of my books for now since I’m not completely satisfied with how they turned out. I’ll be rewriting everything from scratch because I really want to give you all something better and more meaningful.
          
          I won’t be posting for a month or two since exams are coming up and writing needs time and focus. I know it’s already been almost two months since the last update, and I’m truly sorry for the long wait. Things got a bit messy in the story, and I want to fix that properly.
          
          When I come back, I promise I’ll shower you with lots of updates and improved chapters.
          Thank you so much for your love, patience, and support—it means the world to me.
          
          Kris, signing off for now

authorkrizella

Ok, let me start... WHAT THE ACTUAL HECK IS THIS?  PLEASE EXPLAIN IT TO ME... It's one of the most perfect novels I've read... it literally gave me legit goosebumps... You might think that I am exaggerating things, but it's so sacred that it should be kept in a museum... ✨️You are going to live every bit of this story... because there is everything in it—drama, romance, thrill, or what not... ✨️Every chapter made me fall in love with this book... and I want to thank the author because what she wrote is truly a masterpiece... ahhhh... It's highly recommended...
          Status – Completed, so read it. Also, vote for this because I really feel like the story deserves more votes... Thank you @free4zilly for writing this book... loved everything in this book...
          
          ~from a proud reader of OBSIDIAN LEASH BY @free4zilly 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395806422

authorkrizella

  Happy Independence Day   to everyone...

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strangeinsaan

@authorkrizella Happy Independence Dayyy!!!✨♥️
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aaagggttt

Dear,,,, did the author of the book " Shrapit " delete her account along with those books ?????

authorkrizella

@aaagggttt no probs
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aaagggttt

oh, ok.....Thank you for answering.
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authorkrizella

@aaagggttt hi
            She has deactivated her account, which means we won't be able to see her account and find her books...but dw...she usually does this...but when she gets time she activates the account and posts the chapters...you don’t have to worry...she didn't permanently delete her account...its temporary...
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@DaisyDayNew Dramatic drums rolling...Ahem ahem... lets start with starting...it started with one of your books (i don't really remember the name tho but bengali boy was there in it (it was bl)) so yeah...that was my first Indian bl and I actually loved it..(i hope i aint wrong because it will be embarrassing.)
          
          Then you came back with story Bhai and I read those two ch and loved them...Then came the one and only angels and demon..and shrapit....and i couldn't help but love them because what you write is truely magical...every chapter is interesting...and you deserve every vote, every comment and support...(i really love your writing style)
          
          I am happy that I could motivate you..and will support you in every way i can...