authorpinkrose

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012priya

Hi author,your all books are amazing but I 2amt yo know if you have lnkitt id bcoz yhd content that was available on scrollstack but not here  ,want to read it but it was paid content and as a student I am not able to buy it plz if possible upload it on lnkitt plz

Hayden_04

Hey author, I want to share my thoughts on your latest update on the vicious obsession.
          
          I'm confused by your reasoning, author. At one moment, you ask readers to remove their negative thoughts about Veer forcing himself on Aashvi, but that's not the only issue readers have with him. He physically and emotionally hurts her, showing no respect.  
          
          You describe him as a sick bastard, blinded by revenge, willing to ruin anyone because he only hurts "bad" people. Yet, at the next moment, you say he is so consumed by vengeance that he doesn't even consider whether the person he is hurting is innocent—only that they are connected to those who hurt his loved ones. But both things can be true at the same time. He can seek revenge for his loved ones while still being a bad person who hurts an innocent.  
          
          To be honest, being hurt doesn't give you a free pass to be cruel to others. If that were the case, Aashni, who also suffered at the hands of her family, should have acted the same way—but she didn't.  
          
          If you want to portray Veer as blinded by revenge, rude, mean, and disrespectful, and then take him through character development, a groveling period, and redemption, that's fine. It's your story, and it makes for an interesting plot. But readers will react accordingly. They will hate him, start to see his growth, forgive him, and eventually love him.  
          
          Are you expecting readers to watch him hurt an innocent woman in the beginning and simply excuse it because of his past? That doesn’t make sense. You wrote him as cruel and rude, so naturally, readers will dislike him. They don’t hate you or your story; they just hate the Veer from chapters 1 to 21, where he behaves like an idiot and a misogynist. Readers will love him again when he genuinely repents and makes amends for his actions. Readers read stories where MML messed up in the beginning for the grovelling period. Or, is that not the future in this story?

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Hayden_04

Thank you for clarifying and writing the character with such depth and consciousness. You are just uncomfortable with readers thinking Veer would r**e or be capable of that. Your story is really so different from others.
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authorpinkrose

@Hayden_04 This is just a starting. Dear you don't know upcoming story. You don't know the plot. My story only depends on revenge and redemption but I can't spoil it now saying veer will regret or redempt all his bad doings. 
            You will understand him slowly slowly.
             
            But know one thing that no one is innocent if it's Aashvi or Veer. You will see the true colours of everyone very soon.
             
            Don't worry don't think that Aashvi will fall for a monster like him!!! 
            
            Just enjoy it for now. You will understand where the story is going in further chapters. 
            
            I don't want anyone to love him because he is male lead. I just want you all to be comfortable as many of the people think that he always threats her that he will r**e her. Noo don't think about this. He is bad because I make his character like this, as I wanted a story to look like. 
            
            I am not covering his wrong doings. 
            
            For now enjoy the further story. I think you will understand the main root of Veer behaviour with Aashvi not because she is his enemy.
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