Hi Author Dearest,
Your story Aarzoo was so soulful, I never felt this content on reading a story for a long time.The story was simple, it didn't have any twists and suspenses. But it had a soul, a longing, a stillness in it. It was as if the story unfolded before me, I could feel Inaaya and Rayaan 's pain, suffering , love, indecisiveness , happiness and loneliness personally. The choice of words you used were excellent. The story flow was good. The end was a much apt one.
I should really thank you for creating such a good piece of work, maybe this is what I really needed right now, the stuff iam going through.