I love your story you write great, I wish in a chapter I'd like to see that tadgh finds out about her cuts and knows why she does it and tells her not to that again and gets into a fight with her older brother maybe? Or goes to her house? And talks to her mother?. They're ideas maybe you liked them and you wanted to put them in your story, but I think they'd look good in the story again just my opinion, you write great though really. You have imagination. I'd also like for you to like a second story of them. Like two books on wattpad of them to have us intrigued.
Also, could you put Nora's Playlist and tadghs? Like chloe walsh does? It's cool