Avery- I have read all of your book so far and I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter. I must tell you that I'm very impressed with your writings. You have quite a knack for detail & suspense. I found it difficult to stop reading at 1:15 in the morning when I really needed to go to sleep. I think when you are done with it, you really need to clean up the typos & submit it to some writing contests! You may want to consider a major in English, journalism or whatever would expand on your gift....and it is a gift you have my dear! Keep up the great work!! Love you, Shirley
