the storyline for Perangkap Haris is really good, but the english needs some correction as there are quite a lot of errors and i would also suggest adding a clearer marker to indicate when a new scene begins, as it can be a bit confusing at times
Terima kasih di atas tegurannya awak cerita ni dah bertahun lamanya, dek kekangan masa, awa tak sempat nak check semua errors. Apa pun, terima kasih sudi baca☺️