awa_90

Sorrylah kalau korang dpt byk noti citer HMF..baru perasan semua bab dekat draft
          	
          	Selamat membaca.
          	
          	(Setelah makan masa bertahun nak update)

HusnaEllyana

the storyline for Perangkap Haris is really good, but the english needs some correction as there are quite a lot of errors and i would also suggest adding a clearer marker to indicate when a new scene begins, as it can be a bit confusing at times

awa_90

Terima kasih di atas tegurannya awak cerita ni dah bertahun lamanya, dek kekangan masa, awa tak sempat nak check semua errors. Apa pun, terima kasih sudi baca☺️
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awa_90

“Your life is your story. Write well. Edit often”
          
          Indeed!

awa_90

@zenzen997 so sorry..sibuk, tak dan nak sambung story yg byk sgt tergantung
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zenzen997

@awa_90   rindu karya awak awa...
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