awa_90

Minat betul korang dengan cerita haris tu eh…notinya keluar non stop riak si haris nanti

atikah9

Ada sambungan x cerita ank haris 
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HusnaEllyana

the storyline for Perangkap Haris is really good, but the english needs some correction as there are quite a lot of errors and i would also suggest adding a clearer marker to indicate when a new scene begins, as it can be a bit confusing at times

awa_90

Terima kasih di atas tegurannya awak cerita ni dah bertahun lamanya, dek kekangan masa, awa tak sempat nak check semua errors. Apa pun, terima kasih sudi baca☺️
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awa_90

“Your life is your story. Write well. Edit often”
          
          Indeed!

awa_90

@zenzen997 so sorry..sibuk, tak dan nak sambung story yg byk sgt tergantung
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zenzen997

@awa_90   rindu karya awak awa...
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